Starkholmes Syndrome
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There's a serious point behind this, but I've masked it in jokes so you'll never know.
I thought the night had gone alright
in fact, it was terrific
she gave our date a six point eight
which I thought over-specific
I offered her my hand... I gambled on a kiss
she said "some music criticism wouldn't go amiss"
P4K took my baby away
they took her away
away from me
I thought she was the best
the best I'd ever seen
she said I wouldn't make her
top ten of 2015
I asked if she would like to take a walk around the lake
she said she was reading an interview with Drake
P4K took my baby away...
I asked to see her again, though I thought
the chances infinitesimal
I'd never have guessed that she wanted my love
expressed in perfect decimal
Joke #1: the title. I got that instantly.
Joke #2 required I go to Google (actually DuckDuckGo, but still...) to find out what P4K actually is. I reread the lyrics, got it, and facepalmed. This joke is serious. If I ever date a music critic I'll definitely be wary. (On a random yet related note, TV Tropes says "8.8" is a trope. And yes, it's related to review/ratings websites, though the trope namer is IGN rather than Pitchfork.)
Now for the song. Rousing and catchy and spot on target. The final rhyme works as a killer punchline. The backing vocals are that extra little touch that make this (sorry) a perfect ten.
Comments
This has a lovely mesmerizing quality between the marimba sounding melody and deep fuzzy bass. I love how it builds. Lovely music!
Real good listen
For me it was kind of "Trance like" or meditative. I went on a journey with many directions
I must come back when it's quieter and have Musey listen. I'm sure it'll put ideas in her head
this is fucking sick. love the vibe and sounds throughout. great use of the bass coming in and out at the beginning for maintaining a nice floaty momentum. filter roll on the bass is straight butter.
real nice!
Totally beautiful. I love the combination of textures and that sweet-sounding little clockwork marimba thing running through the whole thing is so lovely and wistful.
Hypnotic.
Lovely harmonies and textures throughout the whole song. Good use of bass and treble.
Great production! Really cool hypnotic style, I dig the synth layering
That's a crafty bit of arrangement--and a lovely, gentle way to start my day. I love the way the guitar melds with the electronic sounds. You could even put an ethereal wash of owl vocals in there somewhere.
Sweet and hypnotic and very recognizably your style even without vocals. The guitar fit perfectly even with the heavy distortion later in the tune.
Nice change of pace from Ramo-punk to this. It's interesting that you can do both so fluently. Impressive sound and production. And good structure, easy start and similiar end and some improvisation in the middle. Also a great bass sound. There's enough space in the mix for vocals...
This is great. I quite enjoyed it.
Oh, that's great! I love the peaceful, somehow shimmery feel, and the flimsy guitar is absolutely gorgeous! Reminds me of The Durutti Column. Superb!
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